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Season Two - tagaloguesComments Leave a comment - Please list episode name and codename (if you have one) Season One | Season Two | Season Three | Season Four Back to SMK Main FanFic page Jess87 - Are you sure you didn't write the actual episodes, Tiff? They're so good! Keep them coming! randibaby - This is the sweetest tagalogue yet Tiff! Excellent descriptions of the setting and scenery. Thank you! quiltmama - Great as usual, Tiff! How did you learn so much about London and the Ritz, or is it 'creative license'? Nightcrawler - That was great! I sure did have a great time reading it! Loved the depth to Amanda's thoughts in this one. LeesAmanda - I've read all your tagalogues, Tiff, and they're great! They just keep on getting better and better! Can't wait for the next one! dolphinper - Tiff, What am I going to do when I go on vacation. I won't have access to a computer and I don't know if I can survive a week without reading your tagalogues! nectar99 - Wow, Tiff! Excellent tagalogue! I think you must stay tagalogues ahead to keep up! You have such a knack for these. I don't know how you come up with so many wonderful ideas. BBisBest - Tiff, LOVE your tagalogue, as usual. What I like is that Lee was sufficiently familiar with London to know a place where they coudl go and have a "proper" British tea. He is already so hooked! liketoknow - I loved it, Tiff. I looked for this a little earlier and I couldnt find it. I thought I would have to go through a day with out my fix. Thank goodness I decided to try again. I really look forward to these. KingFan - Thanks again, Tiff! I had a bad day and couldn't wait to come home and read the latest tagalogue because I knew it would make me smile. They just keep getting better and better! Keep up the good work! mdmom - (sigh) I always loved how Amanda tried to take care of Lee, i.e. straightening his tie and I loved his expression when she did it to Connie in this episode. This has got to be one of my favorite Tagalogues of yours. cubscoutlady - Amanda knew she wouldn't want to share this moment with anyone else. You got that right, Tiff! I wouldn't want her to share it with anyone else either! Thanks for filling in the episodes that PAX cut! SilverLining - How very sweet -- afternoon tea with Lee Stetson ... Sigh! Can't wait to see this season's tagalogues ... ups and downs and all kinds of emotions get going ... and your wonderful interpretations ... Thanks! liz15862004 - It was great Tiff! Loved every minute of it. Oh, but my breath catches in my throat every time I read it. They come so close, yet never get anywhere til later on. It's soooo annoying and frustrating having to wait. Keep 'em up! abigfan - Nice job, Tiff. I'm really looking forward to the Europe tagalogues - I love those eps! It was very typical of Lee to do something so nice for Amanda and then try to make it seem like it wasn't a big deal. He was in denial for such a long time! leeluvr - Okay, Tiff ... fess up! How long have you had this 'tagalogue' floating around in your head? You so perfectly portray Lee and Amanda, you can't really tell where "To Catch a Mongoose" leaves off and your writing begins. You had to have thought about this one for a while ... THANK-YOU! ScarecrowsAngel - Is it boring for you that everyone loves your tagalogues, Tiff? It is? Well, that's just too bad, isn't it? Because I can only repeat myself ... another wonderful tagalogue! How Amanda is suddenly so insecure about whether she belongs there and Lee reassuring her ... great! Loved the rest, too. More! HeartPendant - Another great one, Tiff...they all are great! You're doing a great job with these tagalogues, and I look forward to getting to work, so I can read these! Thanks for starting my mornings off right...I just wish I had somthing to look forward to in the afternoons...except when I get home to watch my SMK! BBisBest - Tiff, you are terrific!. I look forward to your tagalogues. Having been to London, this one sure brings back a lot of wonderful memories. I can imagine Lee wanting to show Amanda a good time, seeing they/she had some free time before returning to The States. And tea at the Ritz ... how VERY special. Lets face it ... both of them are hooked. SMK720 - Congrats, Tiff, another great showing! Love where Lee tweaks her about Trixie's things. He does LOVE to tease her! And great part where she adjusts his tie. Always looking out for her Lee, even though he wasn't 'her' Lee then, or was he? Hmm! It was meant to be! Friends. Aww! And to put myself right back in the gutter, Lee could brush knees with me anytime! Thanks for posting, Tiff. I really enjoy reading these. Another solid story! lena_hope - What a joy! I would love a spot of tea, thank you! Awesome tagalogue, Tiff! I love that Lee surprised her with an afternoon at the Ritz! I also like the way that she fixed Lee's tie, just like Connie's! That was sweet! An episode of SMK, one of your tagalogues, and a lovely spot of tea make for a perfect afternoon! Thanks for all of the hard work and dedication that goes into writing these ! You make every episode of SMK all that more special! Talent exemplifies in your writing! Again, awesome job! MusicBox - Very well done Tiff! I love it as usual. Amanda being unexpected. Yes, let's keep it that way! Love this part! I love how you showed us what she was feeling earlier in the episode. GREAT insight to her feelings! (Although ANYONE would feel that way with Lee clasping her hand! LOL!) Ooh! One of my favs in the episode was when she straightened Conrad's tie and the way Lee looked while she did it! LOVE that she also did this to Lee! (sigh) Second Season *romance* smkukfan - Like this part about Lee not knowing what to expect with Amanda and her reply. Lee teasing her about keeping Trixie's things! That's too funny! I'd like to see that ... I like the part about tie-fixing. It's one of those sort of throw-away things in the show that are so meaningful. I mean, who goes up to a fellow worker and just straightens their tie? It's just a subtle indicator that there is so much more going on here than just 'business associates.' Can anyone lend me a fan? Amanda knew she wouldn't want to share this moment with anyone else. And neither would we! Loved it, very subtle, but lay off the 'wrong side of the road stuff, huh?' That's YOUR problem. WE are doing it right! LOL! Jude4247 - This is a good one, Tiff! I love how you capture Amanda's uneasiness with being at the Ritz. I think she always feels like she is too "simple" to be able to fit into these places. And Lee always calms her doubts. I love how Lee had it all planned out beforehand. How thoughtful! Also loved the reference to Amanda picking off an imaginary piece of lint from her skirt in the cab. Shades of thing to come with the Baron. Or as Lee refers to him "His Royal Neatness." I really like these little details you always seem to drop into the tagalogue. For specific passages I liked, I really liked the part about Lee and Amanda while waiting for the double decker bus. I had the same feeling while watching the episode. They were shaking hands for quite a while. Although from the camera angle it looked like they were too far away to reach, but anyway ... They seemed to just "linger" there like that. Loved how Amanda was trying to tell herself that it was the "atmosphere of London" that had her all flustered. One of my most favorites was this, "I don't know. Maybe you should have kept Trixie's things after all. That may be better," he teased with a grin. She playfully smacked him again and laughed, and he joined her. Absolutely loved this line. I always loved this part in the episode when she pulls the Madonna style lingerie out of the bag, and Lee is like "Oh ... career girl." You can't help but LOL! I'm sure a part of Lee wouldn't have minded seeing Amanda ... Oh, no this is still second season, maybe too early for that. Nah, I'm sure he was still thinking it. The least little bit of contact between them ... just gotta love it and how Amanda is reacting to it. It's almost like you are feeling it right along with her. Talk about living vicariously! Go to To Catch a Mongoose - Tagalogue
liketoknow - Tiff, for being nervous about the Europe episodes, you sure are doing a wonderful job! CountOnIt - Loved this one. All the intraspection on Lee's part. (sigh) (singing) "I think I'm falling in love." quiltmama - Great as usual, Tiff. I've come to rely on these kinda like a new mini episode! Keep up the good work! SMK720 - Love the way you have him thinking there, Tiff! He's caught! LOL! But lucky for us, we have the all those wonderful episodes to come for Amanda to begin to reel him in! AmaLeeLane - Enjoyable as usual! I really like how you are laying the foundation early in Season 2 of Lee exploring his feelings for Amanda a little more. Even he can't totally deny that chemstry! MyAmanda - Loved it. I really like the disappearing act on Lee. A little taste of his own medicine. Have you thought of writing another ff about Lee getting to take Amanda site seeing? Hmm! Sounds good to me. Dolphinper - Tiff, For all your worrying last night, it's another fabulous tag. I want to go to Munich now. Actually I want to go to all the places in Europe that were shown the second season. I will just have to save up for the SMK European Tour. liz15862004 - Gee Tiff, you sure are great at these things? Did you take any special English classes when you were in school? Wish I could write like you can! Mind giving me a few tips? Sure would appreciate it! I just loved that one! Keep 'em up! Teal - Oh, Tiff, you stay up way too late! But, we're oh so glad that you do! Another great one! I'm so glad you choose that scene to elaborate on...I wondered why her mother didn't see her talking to "that guy in the suit?" Thanks for explaining it for us! lena_hope - Tiff, wonderful job! I love Lee's thought process while at the cafe! I also love Amanda's getting the upper hand in this one! Excellent! I loved when Amanda hopped on the bike with Lee in the episode, and I loved the way that you recaptured that in your tagalogue! Thanks for another great ending to another great episode! MusicBox - LOVE it, Tiff! Her disappearing act was classic! She's getting good! LOL! I really enjoyed this one, too. I like where you're taking his thoughts about touring Europe with her. Wouldn't that be fun to see! Oh *that man* indeed! LOL! If Dotty weren't so ditzy she might notice him! LOL! Thanks Tiff, for burning the midnight oil! LOL! I hope you get some sleep today! smkukfan - Wonderful stuff, Tiff! I love that Dotty noticed Lee - "the man in the suit" - considering all the very near misses. I wonder if she fully believes Amanda's explanation, especially as she was missing all night? My favourite bit of your tagalogue was when she turned the tables on him about his eavesdropping skills, telling him he needed to take a refresher course. Considering he's supposed to be the best, he seems to get caught a lot by her. I really, really love this part! Great work, Tiff. matahari2 - Tiff! Thanks for another delightful read! I got a kick out of your use of Lee's by-the-numbers tourbook references (I wondered the same thing!), and Amanda turning the tables on him with the disappearing act--cute! This was already one of my favorite episodes, what with the cloak-and-dagger feel throughout, secret steins and code phrases, along with Lee's thinly disguised jealousy of the baron (His Royal Neatness). And then here you come to add some delicious icing to this already-great cake! Thanks! kolinksy - Tiff, this was very enjoyable. Like others have mentioned, I was so glad when you had Dotty ask her who was the man she was talking to because as I watched yesterday I kept thinking how could Dotty not see her when she was sitting facing in that direction and they were standing there in plain sight not very far away. I sure think Dotty's curiosity would have had her watching where Amanda was going. I also loved the backward glance and "almost imperceptible wave" at the end. Thanks for writing, but I have to agree if the time stamp is right you sure are staying up way to late to keep all of us readers satisfied! buffy - Loved this tagalogue! Of course, you all know this one's my favorite episode for purly personal reasons! I'll tell my Neuschwanstein and Munchen stories in person but I might shock y'll if I let loose here! (grins) Remind me not to use your tour book to plan a trip! Short shopping stop in Oberammergau. No *way* I could do Oberammergau shopping in a short stop. *Way* too many goodies, including some exquisit carvings that my high school and college student budget just couldn't manage! hmm... Wonder If I could'da have talk Lee into taking me on a tour of Bayern if he was unwilling to take Amanda! Oh yea, I was married to my Munchen souvenir by then wasn't I? LOL! HeartPendant - Tiff, this was so enjoyable and so cute! How do you know so much about the places in Germany? Have you been there yourself? And the descriptions in the tour guide book...I've never been to Germany, but just reading your tagalogue descriptions, I want to visit those places. I loved how you incorporated Amanda's "disappearing act" into the story...poor Lee. I always wondered how Dotty could miss such a handsome man, dressed in suit, talking to Amanda. She is nosy enough to look around, etc. Also, I wondered what excuse she gave to Dotty when she went to that bar to contact Hatty that night? Loved how he wanted to eavesdrop on their conversation! And those thoughts of his...wanting to show Amanda the sites...Yup, he is hooked...and the way he has to tell himself their relationship was strictly professional is a classic denial technique! Lee, give into it...it's a losing battle! Thanks again, Tiff. Keep up the GREAT writing. BBisBest - Tiff, you are terrific! Great tagalogue, as we've come to expect! Loved reading your tagalogue. I served in the US Army in Germany two times and am familiar with the places you mentioned. This one brings back a LOT of memories for me, as I was stationed, while I was on active duty in the Army, in Europe and visited the Munich area several times. Especially Neuschwanstein (New Swan Stone, if anyone wants a translation), one of those beautiful places that when you see it, you realize it is even more incredible than you could imagine. And it is the "theme" castle that Walt Disney uses. And Linderhof, which was the only one of the 3 castles Ludwin II finished, is an absolute jewel. And the Glockenspiel (Glock is german for clock) in Munich is fascinating. Visited several times, would go back there in an instant if I had the chance. Bavaria is so beautiful, and there is so much hgistory and "Mad" King Ludwig II is one of my favorite historical characters. I just LOVED being in Germany. And Dotty noticing "the man in the suit". And how A. deftly half answered and changed the subject. Let's face it, Lee is HOOKED already! So, thanks for taking me back to one of my FAV places in the world ... Southern Germany. And Berchtesgaden, Kehlsteinhaus are still very interesting too! Been there, done that. Except not with as handsome operative or agent or spy - not that lucky! Jude4247 - Can't get the grin off my face with the way this one ended! I liked how appealing the thoughts of viewing Munich with Amanda, alone, was to Lee. Tiff, sometimes we are on such the same wavelength it's scary. When you have Amanda asking Lee how he knew exactly what numbers in the tourist handbook to tell her. As I watch the episodes, I make little notes and I wrote down, "It's cute how Lee always knew what number in her tour book to give her for the next meeting place." Loved how Amanda kept disappearing on him. Too hysterical. I always loved that part in the episode and Lee saying "Hey, I'm supposed to do that." Liked how in your story you have Amanda telling him, "I think that young woman over there is trying to get your attention." LOL! He fell for it! Your characterization is always "right on." All of Dotty's questions. Amanda "correcting" the boys, Lee sitting close enough to eavesdrop. Perfect! Dotty did have a point though with Lee not looking like a tourist in his suit. I thought the same thing when Lee and Amanda met at the first spot. When Lee comes walking up and is carrying those cameras. He is looking so good in his suit and his hair is perfect, I thought "he doesn't look like a tourist to me. He looks like he just stepped out of GQ!" And again, Tiff, loved the way you ended this one. Took me back to Gifthorse "do not look at me when I talk." This time it was reversed on Lee. Great job, I loved it! Go to The Times They Are a Changin' - Tagalogue
chplady - Great one Tiff! Glad I had the ice water handy! LOL! And you gotta love the belt scene! 'Vette36
- Abosolutely love this tagalogue! I love all the parts where Amanda
gets to do the teasing! 'Vette36 - I've been reading your tagalogues to every episode every single morning! I think you're the greatest writer! Nightcrawler - Loved the way Amanda and Lee spoke simultaneously! Just goes to show how much Lee knows about her! MyAmanda - Love it! I always love to watch their reactions when both speak at the same time. The belt scene is one of my favorites too. liz15862004 - Oh my gosh! That is so great! I get butterflies in my tummy every time I even think about that. Good job, once more (as if you could anything but a great job). emaspy777 - Well ... I'm certainly a fan of your fiction. I just read about ten of them. But, I must go to bed. Great job. I really like all of them, but esp. this one and the Mongoose one. Thanks. ScarecrowsAngel - I just love how I can easily imagine your tagalogues really happening. I'm almost scared. What will we get to read when each episode has its tagalogue? Keep up the good work, Tiff! nova - I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for writing the tagalogues. I just love reading them and they always bring a smile to my face no matter how rough my day has been. Thanks! SMK720 - Another great job, Tiff! I have the ice water AND a fan blowing! Love the belt scene, that is something I would have loved to relive! Can't have him running around without a belt ... could be interesting! BBisBest - Tiff, you have done it again! Love your commentary. I forgot to count the number of times Amanda asked Lee to remove his belt. And he had no clue why. Amanda is not a "real" secret agent, but she sure can think on her feet. GO MOM! HeartPendant - I loved it, Tiff! But need I say more? I loved the reference to the belt scene. A is so resourceful...even with a belt prong...the agency should have moved her to safe cracking! I sometimes wish that the show was 2 hours long and not an hour series, so that we could have seen more development... BUT, we have talented writers here to help us! BTW on the side note, have you ever thought about writing a full reuion script and sending it to either Kate or Bruce? Just a thought! Ok, looking forward to tonight's tagalogue. Keep up the AWESOME work! MusicBox - Thanks for the ice water warning ... got mine out of the freezer a while ago. It's still a little icy. (grins) ROFL! I love the conversation with Arlene. How cute. I love how even this early on they are finishing sentences and saying the same things. His reaction to the fact that Amanda had a few pages from that book ... LOL! So very Lee. Oh how I'd love to get my hands on that book ... "Amanda..." His voice contained a partial warning mixed with a little impatience. I LOVE this! How totally in character! He does this so often! (sigh) You know, we saw a Porsche on the freeway today. They are so small! Oh, to be that close to Lee Stetson ... Oh, the frustration! It's strating to get worse! I love this one, too, Tiff! How much can one woman take, huh? LOL! She's got nerves of steel ... Great Tiff! smkukfan - Way to go Tiff! I love how they finished each other's sentences. At least you referenced the book. I never understood why they would introduce Amanda to Arlene Francis rather than attempt to sweep it all under the carpet ... except they wanted to have Arlene in the tag to get value for money! Ahh ... deconstructing amandarambles 101! LOL! Oooh, the anticipation of what she's about to read from that book ... I'm ROTFLOL at this! (love-15) "No wonder why you fantasize about secret agents!" (15-all) Amanda can't think clearly when she's looking at Lee ... (30-15) ...a handsome operative who could turn her insides to mush with just a look. I know just what she means! He does it to me every time! Hmm, the belt scene ... Obviously, I love this scene, and after all it is only a belt, so what's the big deal? His response makes it so embarrassing for her, though. I did wonder what she did to him to cause such a reaction when removing his belt... Whatever the score I'd got going before (must have missed out some points) I think that's game, set and match to Amanda. Thanks for this, Tiff. Off to cool down now. Appreciate the entertainment. I'll have to watch the episode again check out the belt scene (again). Jude4247
- Loved how Lee says he doesn't know how Amanda can say so much in
one breath and Amanda's explanation. How she doesn't take time to
think about breathing and she gets so nervous she's afraid she won't
get it all out. I also liked how Lee referred to Amanda being able
to be a "black belt confuser." I always thought that was funny!
I liked how impatient Lee gets with Amanda when she tells him that
not all of the pages to Harriman's book were burnt. When Amanda is
reading from the pages she had and reads about Lee being the one they
call when the fairer sex in involved. The twins.... I absolutely loved
Amanda saying she was going to keep those pages for future reference.
She probably filed them along with the picture she kept of Lee at
the office party from J. Edgar's Ghost. Go to Double Agent - Tagalogue
ScarecrowsAngel - Tiff, great tagalogue as usual. And a nice take on the letters, too. ele - Another nice job Tiff. You made very good use of various elements of the episode. randibaby - THANKS! Another great one! Loved the descriptions of Europe. You are *too* good! liketoknow - I loved it, Tiff you certainly have captured their growing feelings toward each other. BillyBlueNote - 'Angel' Wow! Very clever. This one was really good! You must get tired of being praised! Nightcrawler - A little peak into Lee's thoughts? More than a little! Fantastic! The last paragraph was so cute! Spins2 - Tiff I really admire your writing and enjoy your tagalongs to all the episodes. Keep up the good work! LeesAmanda - Another great one Tiff! I loved the part about the Sound of Music (it's one of my favorite movies!) cutenose - Emily glances down to see Lee stroking Amanda's hand with his thumb. So natural, so unconcious, so cute! Lanie - I was really disappointed when they didn't say what the letters in the drawing actually spelled. Thanks a lot! Karthy - Thank you, Tiff. I loved this episode, and your tagalogue should have been the tag of this episode. It was great. dotty'sbaby - Great job, Tiff. About time Lee starts putting it together ... even if it won't really be until the end of next season. liz15862004 - Oh Tiff, I just LOVED this one! I love how Lee agrees that she is an angel. Ooh! butterflies in my tummy again! ScarecrowLover - A perfect ending to a perfect episode. Tiff, I really think you should consider writing books. I'd buy them all. chplady - Great tagalogue, Tiff. Love the part with the letters. Yes, a lot of touches, hand holding, and don't forget Lee with his shirt open! Ooh baby! mdmom - I love this ep. Emily is one of my favorite guest characters. I wish she could have been in a fourth season ep. Tiff, once again your tagalogue is right on. daizy - Oh Tiff! This one was a really good one! I loved how you did the whole thing. Oh gosh! You make them seem so real. Where were you when they were writing SMK? emaspy777 - Thanks again, Tiff. You're tagalogues always make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I was thinking the other day you should write some SMK mystery books like Nancy Drew or the Hardy Boys. SMK720 - Thanks, Tiff! The highlight of my days (right after SMK, of course!) has been your tagalogues! I really look forward to them, and just wish the boards would be a bit more cooperative in letting me access them ... another story though! AmaLeeLane - Awww! This may well be one of my favorites so far! As usual, you've done an excellent job of capturing their feelings at this particular stage. The agent/angel part was so clever! While watching the episode, I remembered how much I enjoyed 'your' ending the last time around. Great look into Lee's thoughts and feelings. Scarecrow2001 - That's great, Tiff. I like how you put all the letters in the story and that Lee figured out what they were. I also like reading about what he is thinking. Thanks for another great job. BigFellaFan - Thanks, Tiff! It was great as always. Really liked how Lee was so proud of himself for figuring the letters out...Without Amanda's help. Starting to feel a little dependent is he? So he definitely thinks angel is fitting! Hmmm! KingFan - The first thing I do when I get home from work is check for your latest tagalogue! Another good one, Tiif. They're all so good that sometimes I can't remember what was part of the ep and what was part of the tagalogue! Keep up the good work! MyAmanda - I loved all the tenderness in this episode. Oh and of course the dolphin siting! YUM! You did a terrific job extending the tag. I liked how you added the letters to spell out 'Agent' and 'Angel.' What about a fanfic about rest of their stay and site-seeing. Hmm? eeyore - A great episode deserves a great tagalogue...and this one certainly did the trick. Thanks, Tiff! LOL at the fact that Amanda had convinced Lee to take her on the Sound of Music tour. Such and Amanda thing to do ... and he just keeps falling further and further in ... (grins) HeartPendant - This was so good...I really loved the part with the agent and angel! You're so creative! It's so ingenious! And Lee is SO hooked...AWESOME, Tiff...no other way to describe it! Thank you for letting us into Lee's thoughts. I have to agree with Emily and Lee ... 'Angel' is the perfect word to describe Amanda! matahari2 - Wow, Tiff! As everyone has already said, your characterization is amazing. I love it that you have Lee realize that there is something special about his relationship with Amanda, but you also show his reluctance to admit what his real feelings are towards her. In the series itself (at least as I see it), this episode and the others filmed in Europe lay quite a bit of the groundwork for the romance that finally blossoms in seasons 3 and 4. Can't wait to see what you do with Our Man in Tegernsee! BedsideBlueBell - What a wonderful continuation of one of my favorite episodes. Of the early seasons, this one is definately full of fond looks and touches. I love how you continued with the letter game in the picture. I always assumed it would spell out their names. What a clever twist to the story! I was fortunate to be in Salzburg a few years ago and it is one of my favorite cities. Although I was giddy from seeing the Sound of Music sites, I also loved the gardens and the Hohensalzburg which reminded me of SMK. No geisterschloss though. And no really cute American spy, either! LOL! BBisBest - Tiff, wonderful tagalogue again. Greatly enjoy reading them. You so perfectly capture two people who "are not a couple, we are together but we are not a couple." There are so many special moments in this episode, but one of my favorites is Amanda telling Dr. Hanover that they are not a couple, but just two friends who happen to be there but definitely not a "couple." Never believed that for a moment. I wonder how many times they tell everyone/anyone that theirs is a *strictly* professional relationship, nothing more? They are both hooked, for sure. The hidden letters in the drawing, and the special repartee/understanding between Lee and Emily. So very special. MusicBox - I think I'll use your interpretation of the sketch! I love it! Lee's so proud when he figures out the letters! LOL! Too funny. Without Amanda's help. LMBO! How did he survive without her? Ok, I was going to highlight my favorite parts. I sat here and couldn't pick what to cut out! The whole thing is awesome, Tiff. You're showing us what we all want to see, and doing it completely within character and the series! It never ceases to amaze me when I read your tagalogues how seemlessly they fit into Lee and Amanda's lives without breaking *canon*. I think you may find references to your tagalogues in my next story. You know it's so hard to separate them from the series! AWESOME job, Tiff! smkukfan - Congratulations again, Tiff! I like that Amanda wants to go on the Sound of Music tour in Salzburg. I can imagine her and Dotty sitting in front of the TV watching the movie. Can't say it's one of my favorites, but I have seen it many times, so when I went to Salzburg, I checked out all the movie locations too. Would have been much better with Lee though. Now there's a guy that's NOT hooked LOL! A guy, voluntarily taking the Sound of Music tour? I don't think so! Maybe I'm being mean? Covering up his reaction when she's around! LOL! Love it! Hooked! I'm tellin' ya! I'm happy to say I actually got 'agent' before Lee did (perhaps I'm a slow reader) but he got 'angel' before me so I think we'll call it even. Lee holding Amanda's hand and stroking her fingers with his thumb. Phew, I'm getting a little warm here ... again! From his actions in the episode we can tell he's hooked, and you bring that out in your tagalogue wonderfully, without going too far, too soon. Also love how you have them arguing over the letters. 10/10 again. Thanks for these! Love it, as always. Go to Legend of Das Geisterschloss - Tagalogue
RFKing - Well, that was very good. I like the way you told the story from her point of view. billymelrose - That was great, as always, Tiff. I get little empathic shivers of excitement every time Amanda does! SMK720 - Oooh! I was right there for that spin! I was waiting for it! Thanks again. We ALL know that Amanda should have gone for that ride. We all would have! HeartPendant - Oh WOW! My thoughts went to Lee's (BB's) smooth, sleek chest...YUMMY! ...so sporty, so daring, so completely ... Lee. You've got that right, Amanda! Loved it! Hello 'vette! BillyBlueNote - This is crazy! Who would leave their house in the middle of the night, in their bathrobe, to drive around town in a fancy sports car with a handsome spy! Ooooh! I guess we all would! Nevermind! Great job! You rock, Tiff. abigfan - This is one of my favorite's Tiff! The comparison of Lee and the 'vette is so perfect, and the "danger" from the ride, the man, is too good. I'm also grateful you had her go with him. He was so excited to share this with her. I always felt bad for him that she didn't go. Perfect ... just perfect! AmaLeeLane - Now that is definitely the way it should have ended! I'm so glad you gave Amanda the little push she needed to get her to go. He was so excited, like a little boy with a new toy! How could she possibly turn him down? I believe we have another one of those little baby-steps forward in this excruciatingly slow-building romance! Nightcrawler - Yes! Yes! The Porsche is finally gone! Woohoo! This one was great, Tiff. I can see why you had fun writing it. Aww, Amanda. Don't curse yourself! You didn't mean to! It would have been better if you hadn't reacted, but that's okay. I agree about the ride, though. All of the above! Whew! It was the ride of mine too and I wasn't even in the 'Vette! Awesome, Tiff! BBisBest - Tiff, you have done it again! We all knew Amanda would have taken a ride in Lee's new toy, otherwise, why would he have driven to her house? As he said, he was just sort of trying it out and ended up in the neighborhood. No chance that he just happened to be in the neighborhood. And can you think of him showing the 'Vette to Billy or Francine? No way! Both of them truly had the ride of their life! hiyatoots - Great job as always, Tiff! I love this episode. To me, it seems such a turning point in their relationship. The way Amanda brushes his coat while they look at the Porsche in the gorge, the way he's willing to admit his attachment for the car, and his joy in sharing the news of the new Vette. Your tagalogue showed this relationship development continuing. I want the film! Did we ever figure out what is a Bohemian Fling? Teal - Well, I was really impressed with your piece from this episode ... the car as a metaphor ... LOL ... oh my goodness ... very nice. I have to believe you did that on purpose, and if you didn't, don't you dare admit it! Are you a natural at sentence structure, or have you found something that helped you specifically improve in this area? Just wondering, as your writing seems fairly well polished (and at the rate you are cranking out your tagalogues, it appears an easy task for you to tackle). smkukfan - I'm starting to get warm again...major step in their relationship. It sure will. Take the step Amanda! Take the step. Play it cool, girl. Wow, the images invoked by the holding out of his hand and her taking it. Tiff, this is great stuff, very much true to characters! I'm now doing the staring thing along with Amanda ... the hands, the jacket, and oh, that face ... phew! Thoughts taking a different turn? I know exactly what you mean ... Off to the freezer now, back in a moment. ... Please! Walk her to her back door and let something happen! Ok, ok, I know it can't happen yet ... a girl can dream, can't she? The ride of my life, too! Now that's a sad admission! Anyone know of a good looking spy and a Corvette I can borrow? I'll give them back ... eventually! Really great work, Tiff! Go to Charity Begins at Home - Tagalogue
billymelrose - You are the best "reader-into person" I know. I enjoyed your take on the episode. SMK720 - She has that poor man's head spinning! Good job, Amanda, keep him off balance! Thanks Tiff! Love this one! Nectar99 - Very nice. Why didn't the tag go like that? Very nice closure to that one! I went searching for this tagalogue! Nightcrawler - This is one of my favorites, Tiff! Great! Loved Lee admitting he would have missed her. Aww, Lee. That's so touching! cubscoutlady - I love your tags, Tiff. They bring closure to the episode. I usually like the tags of each episode, but your tagalogues make me feel like I've had dessert after my meal. Very satisfying. daizy - Once again excellent as always. After reading this, I took a look at an icon on the forum and saw that it went along with ending. I could picture Lee running his hand through his hair, glad it was over. I don't know probably just me. LOL! It gave me a visual effect. HeartPendant - As always, excellent job! I thought I misheard him in the end of the tag, when he hold out his hand and says, "partners?", but, you've made it crystal clear and so much better! Thank you again. I can't wait until the next episode...Our Man In Tegernsee! lena_hope - Well, Tiff, another superb job on these tagalogues! It almost makes me want to go to my natural color, brown. I said almost. Then again, they did kidnap Gail and she was blonde. Besides that she was drugged the whole episode. LOL! I loved the way that she got Lee to admit that they were partners. Gotta love those Amanda rambles! Thanks for carrying on with these too where the original tag seems to leave off too soon! You've got talent girl! smkukfan - Aww, I should hope you would miss her, Lee ... even if you don't want to admit it. She meant too much to him. Thought so! Hehe ... I LOVE squirming Lee! Oh, Amanda, you let him off the hook with that "partners" thing! He admits it! Hoo-flaming-ray! I can just see those defenses coming down! Hey! No call for that misunderstandings and confusion remark! Play nice, Lee! Aww, he would've missed her if she had left. Let's just give it time, shall we? Nice one, Tiff! MusicBox - ROFL. Poor Lee! Your detail is wonderful, especially here, when he's explaining to Amanda what they are to each other ... unofficially. Hmmm ... do you spend a lot of time studying Lee? LOL! You have his mannerisms down to a T! Another LOL when Lee goes off about Amanda and misunderstandings! He's got his own ramble going there! But he sure knows her! Great ending, Tiff. Their *fight* is great in this episode, brings out so much of the emotion and lets us see how their feelings are coming along. You did an awesome job of continuing it, working through it, and wrapping it up! I think they understand each other a little bit more now! Go to Brunettes are In - Tagalogue Go to Page Two of Season Two Comments Season One | Season Two | Season Three | Season Four |
