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A Relative Situation

'Vette36 - Ooh, this was good! I felt like I was there at another table!

CountOnIt - Great job! Wonderful insight. Loved the stories of a young Lee! LOL!

ScarecrowLover - Great! I love it! They just keep getting better and better. I love the childhood stories. Lee was a bad boy! (grins) Keep up the exellent work, Tiff!

chplady - Great tagalogue, Tiff! Yeah, I think Lee needs someone to take care of him... and Amanda is just the right person to do it. Too bad Lee didn't realize that sooner!

Nightcrawler - Amanda's zinger about how the Colonel conformed a wayward boy into what Lee is today was cute! Nice going, Amanda! Great look into Amanda's thoughts!

Dotty'sBaby - Ooh, Tiff! Neat comment about how the mother in Amanda may need to be taking care of the little boy in Lee looking for stability. What a good way to phrase their complex relationship.

BillyBlueNote - "...something about him kept her coming back. Maybe it was the little boy she saw underneath, or her mothering instinct, or the challenge of breaking through that wall. Then again, maybe it was just Lee." Fantastic insight as to why Amanda put up with all his garbage.

SMK720 - Aww. This was a very sweet ending to this reunion. And Lee knew better then to bring one of the 'Black Book Beauties' to dinner with his uncle. The fur would have flown for sure! The Colonel would have had Lee for appetizers. And kudos to our girl, Amanda, for smoothing over the rough road for family's sake. Good job, Tiff!

MusicBox - "You keep him in line, you hear? He needs a good woman like you!" Boy does he ever! Great as usual, Tiff! I loved the conversation about his childhood exploits! Too funny. And Amanda's final observation ... Maybe it was just Lee. Maybe! LOL! That'd be enough for me! I'm looking forward to the next few weeks! They're getting closer.

eeyore - Well, I admit that I wondered what you were going to do with this tag, Tiff...not the most exciting one. But you did a great job, as always! Love Amanda's thoughts at the end, and how she already sees the Lee that the rest of us will get to see in season 4! I personally think that we learn quite a lot about Lee in Unfinished Business, and her thoughts in this one reminded me of that episode.

HeartPendant - Hey Tiff...were you there with the three of them while they were having dinner? It was as if I was there sitting nearby and hearing their conversation! I always love how you can get underneath each of the characters and let us into their thoughts and emotions ... and the creative weaving of the stories of Lee's childhood! Lee is such a gentleman...pulling out Amanda's chair for her. Maybe it was just Lee. Come now Amanda ... you know your true feelings deep down inside ... admit it ... now doesn't that feel good? Thanks again, Tiff! It was another great one!

smkukfan - That was great! You can really find your way into their heads. Imagine, two grown men acting like children. LOL - imagine that! Thought it was normal! Cool - I love to see a squirming Lee. (grins) Hmm, how old was Lee when he hid under a table? Oh, about 27... (winks) Don't complain, Lee. We sure appreciate the discipline you have. Way to go Colonel! You got that right! He *does* need a good woman like Amanda! LOL! I'd have a hard time not smiling at Lee squirming too! Aww, Amanda's understanding more about Lee and what made him into the man he is. (sniff) ...or do you mean the cocky, arrogant ladies man Lee? Just kidding. (winks) Oh, definitely not bad! LOVE Amanda's little digs about Lee's past. LOL! Aww, poor baby. Doesn't like being put in his place, does he? (winks) Nice one Tiff! I like the words about a brick in his defense wall being taken down. It seems a very accurate description! Thanks again!

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Life of the Party

Lanie - I would love to see Francine's revenge.

randibaby - Cute! I think I'd let Lee keep my hand though!

CountOnIt - Well done! Love the hand stroking stuff. Too funny that he doesn't realize it. HA!

NotExactly - I wondered how you'd add to this one, and I love it. Looking forward to the tagalogue for Odds on a Dead Pigeon!

HeartPendant - Another good one ... I agree with RB, though. I would let Lee keep holding my hand as long as I can get away with it!

chplady - Another great tagalogue, Tiff. Yes, revenge is sweet! LOL! Do you really think Amanda wanted her hand back? I don't think so! I know I wouldn't. LOL!

matahari2 - Wow, Tiff! Another great tagalogue. I especially loved the last paragraph. I always enjoyed their 'secret smiles', and you picked up on that dynamic beautifully!

liz15862004 - Totally awesome! So sweet! I just wish they would hurry up and get to the point where they are involved. Oh well, I wasn't born with patience and will probably never have it.

BBisBest - Tiff, greatly enjoy your tagalogues. Yes, Lee is definitely hooked, it will just take him a bit longer to admit it. I for one thought the "gift" of the feather duster for Francine was just too appropriate.

JustBrowsing - I just finished the episode and the FAVs post! This follows perfectly! You are good! Loved this, I was hoping you would have an "ahhhh" moment. Glad Amanda is back from being stupid and clueless! Thanks for these, Tiff!

smkukfan - Great again! Love Lee's absentmindedly stroking of Amanda's hand although I don't understand why she'd want it back either. She's got to keep their cover story going I suppose (you know the one where it's just business, they're not involved).

JJKelley - I always like your tagalogues. They are well written and truly manage to capture the spirit of the dialogue on the show. This was exceptionally well done. You summed up the episode perfectly. I see this episode as a turning point in Lee and Amanda's relationship as partners. Thanks!

needtoknow - Yeah, yeah, they're not involved. Only I don't buy it. That was very sweet, Tiff. I really enjoy these. Lee absently rubbing and stroking Amanda's hand...and Lee not realizing this ... hmm ... Yes, the writers have the tendency of going back and forth, making Amanda seem clueless ... But boy, does she have courage, from the first episode you can see it! Thanks, Tiff! Since I ran out of video tapes, I can't tape anymore...but I really enjoy these posts!

MusicBox - LOL! I like this aspect of his and Fran's 'relationship.' I can really see them going at each other a lot more than what we get to see. Hmmm ... seems Amanda goes with Lee a LOT more than Francine. LOL! I think Lee makes sure Amanda *fits the bill*. Would have loved to *see* where he tells Amanda she's getting the hang of the spy business and acting more like an agent. I about fell off my chair. I can only imagine what would have happened if I had actually been able to see it! LOL! I love this part, Tiff. (sigh) Love the hand-holding and touching and how Lee doesn't realize he still has her hand. I like his thoughts right before this too. He's starting to realize that there are things about Amanda that he can't ignore, but that he doesn't want to admit! I love that.

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Odds on Dead Pigeon

smkukfan - Enjoyed it as usual, better than the original (as always). Don't know how you do it.

'Vette36 - As always, great job, Tiff! You're very talented, and I love reading your tagalogues every morning!

ScarecrowsAngel - Thanks for another beautiful tagalogue, Tiff! I'll go and make me a cup of hot chocolate now.

candystriperagent - Where would we be without these tagalogues? I would be going through withdrawal by now. Great work again.

AmandahLeigh - That was great! I've got a big smile on my face and the kids in my class probably think I'm pretty weird right now! Tres bien!

Liz - Many thanks, Tiff. Way, way, way good. A huge improvement over the original tag. Love your attention to detail. The making the hot cocoa scene: warming the milk on gas vs. electric ... You make it so real!

AmaLeeLane - I wouldn't put this one up with my favorite episodes, but I do love how it shows us how well they know each other and how close they have become -- whether they'll admit it or not! That line at the end about Amanda knowing she could sleep peacefully knowing Lee is out there watching over her says a lot! Nice job!

Scarecrow2001 - I think that the double role just shows the amazing acting capabilities that she has and bet she had as much fun playing that part as we did watching it. Kind of spooky though to think that someone out there looks just like you. Wow, kind of makes me glad I'm not a twin, but then that could be fun too. Nice tagalogue, Tiff!

HeartPendant - Oh Tiff, another FABOO job on this! You've incorporated everything so well and tied things into a perfect ending for the episode! Thanks for the addition of Amanda's "acceptance" of the whole ordeal! I wouldn't recover so fast, if I found out someone who looked like me was out there acting like me and trying to kill my "partner"! I guess I'll be looking over my shoulder and be paranoyed for quite a while! Thanks again.

MusicBox - Of course Lee feels the same way! I love how she is concerned with his feelings and how he is doing as usual. She's awesome! I love his ramble there, too, about when he called and how he knew something just wasn't right. It's rubbing off on him! LOL! Umm, Dotty. How can you ask why Amanda's in a hurry? Have you SEEN what's at your kitchen table woman? LOL! MAN! You'd be in a hurry, too! HELLO? Has Dotty ever been in the Hot Tub before? Cause she'd sure be there tonight if she took a peek downstairs ... Oh yeah, love that Lee knew. He JUST knew! Mm-hm. Yeah, just friends, only business. How on earth did he keep this up for another year? LOL! It's the eyes, man! That's how you knew it wasn't Amanda. The eyes have it! LOL! I do like how you picked this part to use. I loved how he looked at Karen and you could just tell he knew something was wrong. (sigh) Dotty, Dotty, Dotty ... if you only knew what you're interrupting. You'd be kicking yourself like crazy! LOL! I like his remark on being glad it wasn't really Amanda who set up and took out two top agents! Gotta love the little admission here. I really like this one. Her observation that he knows more than he's willing to admit is right on. I sure wish we'd have seen this in the show more! Looking forward to the next few!

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Car Wars

Whaki4SMaKi - Thank you, Tiff. You have really made my mornings this week.

Lanie - Great tagalogue! Love Lee asking her if it's okay to eat in her station wagon, LOL!

Dolphinper - Tiff, as always, another great one. Thank you for thinking of us before you left on vacation and having the tagalogues ready for us. We all appreciate it.

HeartPendant - Thanks again. Kudos for me too! This is why I look forward to coming to work each and every day! This was wonderful, Tiff! I hope things "blow" over with Gino!

Liz - For the gazillionth time (hope it's not getting old) many thanks! Especially these last few episodes, when the tags have been less than stellar, your work has salvaged the show's ending. Love how you always leave a great little "zinger" at the end of the tagalogue so our minds can continue to wander.

MusicBox - Mm-hm! Realizing she's right, calming down because of what she says/does, reassuring her that it *wasn't her fault*. Yup. Classic signs. He's hooked! LOL! "I thought we weren't going to talk about this." ROFLOL! I love this exchange! It's so them. This is my favorite from the tagalogue. I love that you used it twice. I like how she unwraps his sandwich before handing it to him, too. It's one of those little things that *couples* get used to doing. I like seeing these little things that they do without thought with/for each other that show others that there's much more here. And they don't even see it! LOL! (sigh) Is this only second season? We get third pretty quick, right? (sigh) LOL! We can tell you when you'll admit it to her, Lee. I love this one, too Tiff. As I (and many others) have said before, you've got them down so well. I love to read your take on what's in his head and his heart because it really sounds like exactly what he's thinking. Love this one.

smkukfan - LOL! This is all playing out in my head. (grins) Would they really waste time fastening their seatbelts? Well, Amanda, maybe, but Lee - the Monaco/Le Mans driver? I suppose he is under Amanda's influence and this is a family values show. Hmm, has anyone written a fanfic about Gino tracking down and finding Lee for the damage done to that car? Maybe I should make it another Di challenge? Oh, and as an aside...can you tell me where to find him? (winks) Yikes! Barely missing the oncoming car and the squeal of tires with the horn. Yep, I'm still watching on Mentalvision. (grins) Hey now! Amanda, don't apologize. It's not your fault! See? Even Lee agrees with me. Hmm, something more positive to do? How about finding a hotel? Oh, sorry, did I say that out loud? Oops, just thought they both needed a distraction but I guess this is only season 2. All right, I suppose getting something to eat will work too. I was almost right then! She is so forward. (grins) Yeah, yeah, use the pretense of breakfast if you must, Amanda. It's almost like you have a magnet to attract trouble!" In my soon to appear fanfic, I refer to her entire family as having a "psycho-magnet." Think that pretty much covers it! Ahh, one of my favorite Lee sayings. I use it all the time! "You're not kidding!" Nothing simple with Amanda? Hey! Although, he may have a point. LOL! Lee hanging onto the car as Amanda starts to drive away. Ooh, more very nice mental pictures going on here! It's about flamin' time Lee realized how much better Amanda made him feel! Now, waiting even longer before admitting it to Amanda, that's not so cool. Oh well. We wouldn't have much of a show if he'd admitted it straight out. All right, Tiff, this is my last one. Happy now? So, where's my prize? A nice life size cardboard cutout of Lee will be just fine.

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DOA: Delirious on Arrival

JustBrowsing - Thanks for doing these, Tiff. Seems like they are a natural part of the show!

chaunty - Thanks again for another great tagalogue. I'm glad Amanda got a little more closure.

Karthy - Thank you for writting this tagalogue! Another great one! My neice and I both loved how you finished it off.

lena_hope - That was fantastic! Keep them coming! I always like to try and finish off the show, especially when I think there could have been more to the ending. This was great!

Nightcrawler - Wow! That one was fantastic! It was so funny! Poor Amanda! Loved how Lee comforted her after saying how cute she looked wiggling and lining up her putt shot in the hallway!

Lanie - ROFLOL! Great tagalogue, Tiff! Love the little ... um ... relapse into the dream of Lee in the white tux with the Casablanca scene. Really cute him trying not to make her feel embarassed ... and failing at it miserably!

chplady - Another great tagalogue, Tiff! I wonder what it would have been like to see Lee drugged up like Amanda! I also think we can see how Amanda feels about Lee, by that dream .. gee, I'm starting to have that same dream! LOL!

AmaLeeLane - The original tag was kind of cute, but I definitely needed more Lee/Amanda closure to this one and you've managed to do that. Love how you've incorporated the Casablanca dream! Love the reference to Amanda's little wiggle when she was putting and how Lee rushed to assure her! Great way to wrap things up!

HeartPendant - Great job! Thanks again, Tiff. I just love how you tie everything together and bring some closure to these episodes! This was so sweet of Lee to tell Amanda about the reason he agreed to the General's plan of guerilla warfare ... aww! He is hooked! Thanks Tiff! Even though you're tired, thank you for thinking of us!

SMK720 - Thanks, Tiff, for another "better than" ending! You know, Amanda had that great fantasy Casablanca dream about her, Lee and the champagne which told us so much about how she was feeling about Lee. I've always wondered ... what would Lee have thought and done if he had eaten his sandwich instead of Amanda.

smkukfan - Oooh! I'd like you to walk me to my car, too! The hair dryer! LOL! Shades of "I got 'em with the whipped cream!" LOL! Aww, and she is soo embarrassed - great way to remind her about Francine, Lee! So, Lee thinks she's cute? (not that cute?) I'm sitting here cringing in embarrassment for her and that putt shot. Love this bit: "Please tell me that everyone in the office didn't see me do that!" ~~ "All right, everyone in the office didn't see you do that," he repeated. Yeah, right! Then, his telling her she was only in view of half hte personnel. Sure, Lee that REALLY helps! "Yes, ma'am!" I LOVE when he says that in the episode so I'm really glad to see it make another appearance. Oh, I can hear the accent from here. Great job! Nicely played out scene that I can see in my head. You really know these people.

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You Only Die Twice

Liz - You are so good with the details! Thanks, thanks, thanks.

Lanie - Great tagalogue, Tiff! Love the thing with the paper bags. Sounds exactly like how he would handle it!

Karthy - Thanks, Tiff! Another great tagalogue. My mother has been reading them, and she says that you put your heart and soul into each one.

lena_hope - Great tagalogue, Tiff! You really had me going with that "he pulled her into him..." line. I loved it! It really makes the heart go pitter patter! Keep them coming!

abigfan - Thanks for all your work to keep us supplied with tagalogues while you were gone. Wish we could give YOU a raise! This was excellent as usual. Loved the hug too!

BigFellaFan - Great tagalogue, Tiff! So funny how Lee always has the ... lines ... for the other girls, but can never quite come up with what to say to Amanda! Always stumbling over his words or would that be emotions?

HeartPendant - WOW! Great as usual...right up to "par"! A very sweet tagalogue, Tiff! I love the warm embrace at the end! For a person who doesn't let other people into his heart and show his emotions, that "I'm really glad you're alive!"says a lot! Thanks, Tiff!

MusicBox - Putting away the groceries. Hmm ... doing just about anything to be near her, huh? LOL! ROTFL! I loved the whole exchange about poor June and Lee's affect on the women in the office. Somehow with her, the most boring task was... See, told ya! Maybe it was the knowledge that she would most likely be placed with him as a partner, or worse, that she would be placed with someone else. I really like this. Whoa! Smacked him in the face here, huh? LOL! Can't live with her, can't live without her. Gee, and it's only second season! LOL! I'll say it again, you have such a handle on them and their emotions and feelings toward each other and their situation. I find myself reading the tagalogues after I watch a tape of the shows, too! Lee, can I see you outside for a moment? Yeah, thanks ... SMACK! There, done! LOL! How many more days until season three starts? LOL! "I'm really glad you're alive." Ok, I guess he redeemed himself here. No matter how often I read these, like the eps, I love them, Tiff! Thanks for continuing this tradition!

smkukfan - Very nice tagalogue, Tiff. What? Lee's gone domestic? Heck, I don't even put my own groceries away. I'm sure not gonna offer to help someone else do that! Oh, well, I guess, if he is trying to prolong his time with his favorite non-agent, what can I say? Your fault the temp messed up the files? You're not kidding, Mr. So-Good Looking. Normally, reasonable women drop stuff at your feet! His presence would DEFINITELY distract me! (grins) I love: "I do have a reputation around the office, you know," and Amanda's response to it. A reputation? Lee? No! Surely not! (winks) Somehow with her, the most boring job was... Careful, Lee. Wouldn't want you becoming 'normal' now, would we? Lee's suffering serious slippage today, huh? 'Amanda' and 'Agent' in the same thought? Always wondered why Lee hedged on suggesting Amanda receive more training. Doesn't surprise me that he's the reason, though. Maybe it was the knowledge that she would be placed with him as a partner, or worse, that she would be placed with someone else. LOL! Now I like THAT statement, Tiff! I think you see to the heart of the problem, hmm? That thought gave him a start. I'll bet! Awww. The hug! "I'm really glad you're alive." He's right! That did sound awful. 8) though! Well, the hug was. Good one. Now, Tiff, I should know when it's over, right? IT'S OVER! LOL! What a ride! Thanks. Can't wait for the next one.

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Burnout

smkcrazy - What a great tagalogue! Love the flirting and humor!

Nightcrawler - Whew! Needed ice water for that one! That was great!

Liz - Thanks, Tiff. Love the "Walk with me." So very Lee! Let the flirting begin!

espy - Simply FABOO....beautiful characterization and very "Lee and Amanda".

mdmom - Enjoyed it, Tiff. I really liked the, "Walk with me" line. It really was so Lee.

chaunty - I really liked this one ... touching and funny. I liked the playfulness thrown in.

TheRev - Now I can really believe she has accepted his apology and forgiven him! Thanks, Tiff.

needtoknow - Wow! That was so cute. I love this episode and now I love it even more. Thanks, Tiff.

cutenose - One of my favoite eps and a superb ending. It totally matches what's going on in the tag. Love it.

Karthy - Thank you for writing this. I missed the episode. Had an appointment, so thanks for the great tagalogue.

Lanie - Great tagalogue, Tiff! These are such a great idea. The show ends and I always want more... this way, I get it!

ElioraJoy - Wow, that got my heart going. I really like the way Amanda is trying to be so composed, but Lee is able to tell that she's trying to hide it.

quiltmama - This has always been one of my favs, Tiff. I can see the whole thing in my mind's eye, because the descriptions are great and the dialogue is so true to character.

quiltmama - I was wondering what you would do with this, since the original tag is so good, but your tagalogue was just perfect. It kept just the right amount of flirting. Keep up the good work.

SMK720 - You just gotta love the bad boy! Amanda may be able to bounce back after a moment, but I'm sitting in front of the air conditioner, and I don't think it's doing a thing for me! LOL! Great tagalogue, as usual!

chplady - As usual, Tiff, another great tagalogue. This is one of my favorites. Lee can bring out his devlish nature on me anytime! LOL! Love the comment about how she wouldn't want her boys to grow up as ornary as Lee. That was a good comeback!

smkukfan - Nice one, Tiff. I really liked this one. Love Amanda using "You're not kidding!" I think Lee's influence is rubbing off on her! Also love the way she gets him about the kids becoming "ornery" like him! Not a word you hear much around here but wonderfully descriptive. Thanks again.

AmaLeeLane - Great one, Tiff! (SIGH) What a nice way to wrap up a great episode! I love this! Lee's still at that stage where it throws him if his women aren't 'predictable'. Little insecurity there, I guess, and one of those little details that show us how well you know our favorite couple! You've really set the stage for 3rd Season developments now!

HeartPendant - OH, WOW! I really enjoyed this. Another great one, Tiff. Too funny...That'll show Lee not to "toy" with Amanda! Amanda sure has a way of leaving Lee speechless! Boy does she think fast on her feet! And when she gets a little nervous...even better! There's so many more things that I could talk about, but I'll allow others to comment. Thanks again, Tiff!

lena_hope - Once again I bow down to the "master"! Great tagalogue again! I really loved this episode despite the slap, and you made it even better! I am one of the ones who wilts at Mr. Stetson's advances, even though they are to Amanda and not me, *sigh* and that hand thing at the end was so great! I just love the way that Amanda is always saving his butt!

MusicBox - Let the flirting begin! LOL! You have done such a great job showing us the progression of their relationship outside what we see on TV. This one is awesome, too! I love the "walk" around the Agency. HELLO! 'Scuse me while I grab an ice cube tray ... K, I'm back. Gotta love that line. Intentional or not, hearing him say that would just do me in ... "Completely trusted?" LOL! Love this. He's got her pegged. LOVE the little waist-squeeze. (sigh) Hmm, matter of national security and willing to help. Sounds like someone else we know! Gotta love Travis ... These descriptions are awesome. I see him so perfectly in these. For some reason this part about him and his hair stood out to me. Just wanted to let you know I love it! Maintaing her cool? Ah, yes, but this is AMANDA we're talking about! He's too funny. (Of course I'M wilting and he isn't even TOUCHING me!) I really love how she always acknowledges the guards. She's just too sweet. And WTG Amanda! Leave him speechless! Another great one, Tiff. I'd love to find myself a nook, complete with spy ... Looking forward to next season!

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Murder Between Friends

Spins2 - Tiff, you really are an amazing writer! I look forward every day to your tagalogues. Thanks!

Dolpinper - Tiff, you do such a great job with the tagalogues. Have you written any fanfic? If so, I would love to read them.

hiyatoots - Loved your tagalogue, Tiff! Amazing how Amanda can keep her cool around Lee. Keeps him guessing and on his toes!

Karthy - Thank you, Tiff. Another episode has come and gone, and we can depend on you to write a tagalogue that seems like we were there. So, thank you.

BBisBest - Missed reading this when it was new, but I always look forward to your tagalogues. How Lee and Amanda verbally play with each other is delightful to read.

SMK720 - Nightcrawler said it best about danger excitement, intrigue ... "Not enough Lee!" My thoughts exactly. Off the 'Sigh O'Meter' with this one. Great job and thanks!

lena_hope - Once again, Tiff, you have out done yourself, if that is even possible. I loved it! Especially the end when Amanda goes back and says, "It was not bad." Gotta love them!

Nightcrawler - Wow! That was great! "Not enough danger, excitement, intrigue?" More like "Not enough Lee." LOL! I'd love to see where that final conversation would lead! Love it! The neverending quest to get the best of the other one... I wonder who finally won...

BigFellaFan - Excellent tagalogue, Tiff! The whole thing was very very good! I especially loved the ... "It was not bad" ... line! I was ROTFLOL! We just haven't gotten to see as much of the spunkiness of Amanda with her come backs as first season. There is still some, but not the real zingers! Thanks again for another great tagalogue!

HeartPendant - Aww ... so sweet! Lee is so hooked ... but he doesn't want to admit it yet! As for a small alteration ... Us mind? No way! Thanks, Tiff! It was great! Cool under pressure, that is our Amanda ... and Lee trying to prod her about her feelings or the lack thereof for Byron ... then him trying to get her to admit that she "missed" working with him! Poor Lee ... and poor Billy for having to listen to Francine go on and on about her wardrobe!

MusicBox - "I do?" She feigned ignorance, more because she wanted to hear Lee actually say it than because she really wanted to know. Can you blame her? I would have done the same thing to hear him compliment me! Love that she noticed the look on his face when she announced her leaving. I like that she gets opportunites to see his feelings for her and start gathering confidence with him. I love the whole exchange when they talk about Lee getting her out of the garage and away from the carbon monoxide. Great way to go! Too cute that he wants to know how she felt about him carrying her. You KNOW he wonders about it from last time! I'm still loving how these come out! They flow so easily from the original. Bring on season 3!

smkukfan - Let's see if my comments are up to par this time. Ouch! That's harsh, Amanda, saying that about Francine. (grins) Hmm, with Lee's remark, you'd think he cared or something ... but surely that can't be right. Now Lee thinks she's a "very valuable employee"? How cool is that? Amanda's not the only one surprised at Lee's words. I wondered about him complimenting her without prompting too. LOVE the use of the favorite phrase. (grins) Hmm, whatever could have been missing in that new job, Amanda? I can't imagine. You didn't miss Lee, did you? NO! Don't back away from it now! Tell him! See? He wants to know and so do we. Exactly. He wasn't what? WHAT, Amanda? Grr! Rats! Mr. Melrose my eye! LOL! The dig about Wilma. Nice one, Lee. (grins) ROTFLOL! Even better come back, Amanda! Uh-huh! We saw that reaction you tried to hide too, Lee. Uh-oh, now he's wanting to know how it felt to be carried. Eek. Good save! Hmm, a sudden touch of mischief? That's always good. (grins) LOL! Another favorite phrase. Loving them! Oooh, love the mental picture of that "slow smile" on Lee's lips. Mmm! LOVE the ending, Tiff. Nice idea with the tally marks and neverending attempt to get one up on each other. Nice finish, Tiff.

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Vigilante Mothers

Teal - Interesting set up for a fanfic, Tiff ... Lee stays in the Cooperman house ... hmm. Very nice job.

chaunty - Thanks again! I've always loved that volcano scene and Lee's look when she hands it to him.

antivanity - Ahh, another great one and a MUCH better way to close season 2 out imho. I say bring on the flirting!

SMKGirl - Thanks for another great tagalogue, Tiff. I always enjoy your wonderful descriptions and how you continue the story.

SMK720 - Bring on Season THREE! Amen! Redemption ala Tiff style! Lee's not ready ... he better buckle up his seat belt and hang on!

Liz - Yeah, Tiff! Thanks again. I've gotten up extra early just so I can read your tagalogues, because a day without one is like a day without... without... ummmm... a life-sustaining SMK fix, I guess.

ElioraJoy - I wish he could have stayed at that house too. I guess they didn't sign a lease, unless this is the one they're camped out in across from the Russian in One Bear Dances, One Bear Doesn't.

BBisBest - Excellent tagalogue. Always look forward to reading them. I too like the reference to Lee continuing to rent the Cooperman home. Would have made for some interesting moments and brought two of our favorite people closer together.

HeartPendant - "Hey! Don't I always manage to show up in the nick of time? That he ALWAYS does ... and so does Amanda! Another GREAT job! Let Season 3 and the ROMANCE begin! I'm looking forward to your tagalogues to these episodes!

JustBrowsing - OMGosh! Keep renting the Cooperman house? Where is the FanFic on that one? Anyone take the challenge? I liked the tennis reference ... been working on a little piece to explain the tennis lessons in Relative Situation. Fits right into my day. Thanks for these, Tiff! They are brilliant!

lena_hope - Another superb tagalogue, Tiff! (sigh) I am looking foward to many more great tagalogues, so PAX better keep this show going! LOL, on the volcano getting on the upholstery of Lee's care. Another (sigh) wanting to keep renting the Cooperman house, and asking Amanda to dinner! Ahhh... (sigh)

smkukfan - Nice going, Tiff! You've really got their relationship moving in a way that SO enhances the episodes. ...setting what looked like a volcano experiment gone wrong on the picnic table. That is hysterical "like a volcano experiment gone wrong." So you're not gonna explain the tongs either? Way to start up another conversation, Amanda, just keep him talking a little longer ... LOL, Tiff! I always like it when Amanda gets in one of her little digs! Of course, we all know that Lee *always* shows up in the nick of time. Way to go, Dotty! Just get out there and drag Lee in for your daughter why don't you? What kind of mother are you? I'd want you to do it for me ... I *do* want you to do it for me! LOL! Surely Dotty should think that seems a little odd. Amanda's single. Lee's gorgeous with a flash car. WHY wouldn't she be interested? Why would she need to think about it? ... I like embarrassed Amanda too! LOVE the description of how their relationship has changed. It's about time! Bring on the complications! Don't we all look forward to them? Glad you brought back Lee's reaction to having Amanda near and her touches. Very telling! Oh, and you'll be advocating a mystery marriage next! ... Continue to rent the Cooperman house? Yes please! Like to see how that works out. and how long it takes Dotty! Maybe he would suggest it to her. Later. Yeah, right. Much later! Thanks, Tiff. Great stuff!

MusicBox - Great, Tiff! Bring on Season THREE! AMEN! Her life was just as unpredictable as his. Yeah, don't ever underestimate the suburban housewife! I can definitely see him feeling this way. He likes it that she keeps him on his toes -- just the kind of guy he is! ... (sigh) This is one of the things I love about fanfiction. Seeing the feelings and thoughts. I love knowing that soft, vulnerable side of him that misses his parents ... that sees Amanda and knows that that's the kind of mother Jennifer was. It's sad but I love that. ... LOL! Gotcha! I really like the part of the conversation about Mr. Sampson and what Dotty said about the "new neighbor." Too funny. Don't think I'd have been able to tell him what she said, though! Oh, and I love the foreshadowing comment there. You know by now he's really wanting to experience a King mealtime! I like the foreshadowing use of "maybe someday" and how he's admitting she's his partner. LOL! Maybe, someday ... The depiction of his thoughts are AWESOME, Tiff! I love them. Great closure for Season Two. On the brink of ... something ... but not ready for it yet. (sigh) Love the reference to dinner. They start doing that so much in S3 and this ties it in perfectly. LOVE the ending! The little insight to what's going on is wonderful. The whole train of thought on how he's feeling when they touch is awesome too! Good thing the air is on! Love it, Tiff. You've included so much emotion for the season finale ... seeing as how there really wasn't much of one. No cliffhangers here. But your expansion of his feelings and the *not yet* definitely give it that feeling of an emotional cliffhanger. Bravo! And, may I say again ... Bring on Season THREE! Yes! Finally! UST, hot tubs, and innuendos, here we come! The transition to third season is great! It's going to be even better with your tagalogues. His not turning around to see if she was watching him walk away is such a glimpse of their flirting to come! Getting the shivers thinking about it! Too bad he didn't stay at the Cooperman house! Now that would make for an interesting year! LOL! Another great job, Tiff! I love these.

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