Season Three - tagalogues

Comments

Leave a comment - Please list episode name and codename (if you have one)

Season One | Season Two | Season Three | Season Four

Back to SMK Main FanFic page


UTOPIA NOW

needtoknow - Tiff, that was great as always. I love all the teasing between them. Very realistic.

quiltmama - Tiff, you must have sweated bullets over this one, but it was worth it...it is THAT good!

bbfan - Oh! This was good. I can picture him in the elevator with that 'look'. He can be so dense at times!

Whaki4SMaKi - Did you hear me yell your name when the show went off? Awesome tagalogue, as usual!

chickagent - Way to build the sexual tension, Tiff! I love those sort of scenes between them! Love her last line!

smkcrazy - Tiff, just one word ... awesome! This one had me on the edge of my seat! Thanks for writing these for us.

smk_agentaddict - This one was GREAT! I really enjoyed as always! I really needed a continuation of that ep after Amanda's closing remark!

cutenose - They know each other well enough to read each other by now. Ugh. Come on Lee and Amanda, get it out, say it, would you? Whew! I feel better.

AmaLeeLane - You've captured the essence of their relationship with this one, Tiff. The playful banter, the genuine friendship ... the definite sparks! Very fun to read!

sharr54 - I do look forward to the tagalogues, Tiff. This is one of your best! Loved the "close only counts in horseshoes." I can just picture Lee's face as she steps out of the elevator.

chplady - I think you did a great follow-up. Love how he teases her with the kiss on the cheek instead of the lips! And the way she gets him back with the horseshoe comment! LOL!

cubscoutlady - Just wanted to say thanks again, Tiff, for doing these. They are so much fun to read! I know it probably gets old for you, but the rest of us REALLY look forward to them! You do such an excellent job!

Jude4247 - Since I have a hard time containing my comments after reading the tagalogues, I will hold back and let everyone else get to comment on it, so I don't take all the good parts (which is actually the whole thing). Just have to say, the banter is excellent. My overall reaction? *Yowza!*

Spins2 - I am really in awe of your writing abilities. You have a knack for knowing these characters so well that with your tagalogues you can't tell when the original one ends and yours begins! You are a very talented writer and I love to read all your tagalogues. Thanks!

katie - Great job once again. I knew to save the tagalogue for this one for when I got home instead of at work. This one had me rolling. Seriously, tears coming down my cheeks. I love her answering questions with questions and Lee's frustration. Couldn't happen any better if they'd actually filmed it.

Teal - "Close only counts in horseshoes," she retorted, turning the knob and stepping into the foyer. The second time she uses this line ... the double meaning is wonderful. Thanks for bringing it better into focus and for catching it! I always thought there was more to her saying that than she let on at the end ... GRIN!

GearJamGranny - Wow, Tiff! This was great! O.K., lame choice of words, but I just can't really put into words how good it really is! I had that on-the-edge-of-my-seat thing going on the entire time I was reading it! I still read these faithfully, but I just wanted you to know that they are as fabulous as ever, even if I have read them 3, 4, 5, 98 times!

justlikescarecrow - Fantastic job, Tiff! I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. Oooh, my side hurts now. You did a superb job with the characters in this one. I really loved the whole "answer a question with a question" bit. So like Amanda. And the way she managed to get in the last word with another comment to leave him wondering was great. Loved it, loved it, loved it!

HeartPendant - As Amanda said during Do You Take This Spy, "Wow!" This was so good...I can't pick a favorite part, since it's ALL of it! In fact, I'm like Lee ... speechless! I loved every moment! I was laughing my butt off (if that's possible!)! The exchange between Lee and Amanda is just hilarious and I love Amanda running circles around Lee ... Poor Lee! Amanda once again left Lee standing there dumbfounded and speechless! LOL! Thanks, Tiff! You've exceeded the tag!

arlington - Had to chime in and let you know how great these are! I've said it before, but will say it again, I look forward to reading these every morning, and thank you for taking the time to write them. I don't consider an episode to be over until I've read the tagalogue. And I am certain that one day I wont be able to keep the tag and the tagalogues straight as yours so seamlessly blend with theirs. I read these as work too (shhh), and my work doesn't ever make me grin from ear to ear! LOL!

lena_hope - Another great one, Tiff! In fact I loved this episode so much that my favorite line is one that Amanda says to Lee when their each seeking that warmth, "That's one of the things I really like about you, you always find the silver lining." *sigh* And your tagalogue! In fact, all of your tagalogues are wonderful, and I just can't get enough of reading them. This definitely was a turning point for Lee and Amanda, and definitely a step in the right direction. Way to go, Amanda! You know it is only a matter of time now! Thanks, Tiff! Looking forward to those Smooches from the Smooch Writer! LOL!

smkukfan - Tiff, I have a complaint. I keep getting caught at work reading these on my PC when I should be working ... usually because of the grin factor, so I figured I'd print this off and read it ... less conspicuous ... mix it amongst the other papers, etc. But PHEW! It was fantastic ... best yet probably (I think I KEEP saying that). So good that I was having a SERIOUSLY hard time maintaining my 'work-like' composure. I nearly spat coffee everywhere several times. I tried to sip to stop me from laughing, and failed. Trust me when I say payroll reports just don't have the same effect, so it's a bit of a giveaway! Thanks for making my day (and losing me my job ... only kidding). It'd be worth it! Oh, and the "Close only counts in horseshoes" line (and more importantly how you use it) is FANTASTIC - love it!

MusicBox - I love this one, too! Any surprise? (grins) Loved her "not really." Your description of the original tag is great. The way he says, "Right?" you know he’s trying to convince himself. (sigh) ROTFL! Gotcha! Nothing like leaving a gorgeous man speechless. Especially THAT gorgeous man. WTG Amanda! Oh, love how she just keeps walking until she gets to the elevator. LOVE that elevator. Have I mentioned that before? (grins) Love that throat-clearing. So Lee. Poor guy! She has totally annihilated his composure and pulled the rug right out from under him by not letting him off the hook! Gotta love it. ... Just can’t stand to let her leave yet, huh, Lee? Quick, think of something to say! LOL! The whole elevator conversation is just priceless. It's almost literally 20 Questions! Love how she just keeps coming back at him with the question answers and how totally frustrated he is! Geesh, she's not the only one disappointed by yet another near-miss kiss! I even knew that was coming and I groaned! They both certainly know what they're doing. I'd have spontaneously combusted by now! AHHH! Her last comment to him is awesome! ROTFL! Stick it to him, Amanda! Man, I' love to see the surveillance tapes from that day ... Oooh! The second use of, "Close only counts..."! I never thought about the double meaning. Very cool. I also liked how they weren't interrupted, like I thought they were going to be, but that Lee "missed." Great, great, great! I'm just so excited for these third season gems! This is awesome, as usual. Can't wait for the rest!

Leave a comment

Go to Utopia Now - Tagalogue

 

REACH FOR THE SKY

ScarecrowGirl - Tiff, you write these so well that I can see them! What a great lesson! Oh, to be Amanda! *sigh*

Amandah Leigh - It's (sniff) just beautiful (sniff, sniff). Anyway, that's awesome! Very good! Another job well done!

'Vette36 - This is the best way to start the morning: reading an SMK tagalogue written by the glorious Tiff! It was good. Keep going!

AmaLeeLane - At the end of this episode, my husband remarked about no hugs or kisses. I told him the show wasn't over until he'd read your tagalogue. Great job!

Nightcrawler - Sigh. That was great! I so wish that they had you when they were writing the scripts! They could have so benefitted from your additions! If only they were on film...

Karthy - Another one done well. Where were you when they were writing the original scripts? You could have given them more input on Lee and Amanda. By the way, the tagalogue was great!

Scarecrow2001 - I love this tagalogue because this is just one of those episodes where you are left wanting them to have a little more of a conversation and interaction. Thanks for posting this for us.

smkukfan - Another good one Tiff (big surprise). Great characterization on Lee's refusal to admit Amanda's asset to his work and life. "I said I'd think about it," Gotta laugh at this one. He may have the upper hand now, but not for long... Great stuff, Tiff. Keep them coming!

HeartPendant - Another fantastic job! I'm always looking forward to the morning...it's a great way to start a day... Lee is learning! Loved the part about "the best partner he's ever had"! Loved it when Amanda was teaching him how Lee should have held her hands at her back when Lee was pretending to be the security guard... Lots of great moments! Thanks again, Tiff!

lena_hope - Another notch on the board for Amanda! Love the "handcuff" lesson! Again, you have this one going off the charts on the "sigh-oh-meter!" This is another great tagalogue, Tiff, which is why when someone asked us to pick our favorite, I couldn't because they are all so good! As I have stated before, they help make the episodes for me! In fact, after my daily dose of SMK I can't wait to get online and read the tagalogue!

Leave a comment

Go to Reach for the Sky - Tagalogue

 

J. EDGAR'S GHOST

eeyore - Whew, Tiff! This was amazing! Your descriptions were so vivid! Think I'll go adjust the A/C now!

Karthy - Thank you, Tiff. It was great tagalogue. I only wish that they did their tags the way that you do.

AmandaLee - Very good ... thanks for closing that 1-inch gap for us! Even if it was only a peck on the lips.

Spins2 - Enjoyed this one, Tiff. I look forward to seeing what you do with Dead Men Leave No Trails and All the World's a Stage!

twentytwopieces - Awesome job, Tiff! Keep them coming! You should make all your tagalogues into a book. That would be fun to have!

magdap - Thanks for the kiss! I was yelling at the TV, "Come on, ONE more inch!" This tag is more frustrating than Dead Men Leave No Trails!

SMK720 - Thank you, Tiff! Great tagalogue! You just about did me in with that 'little peck'! Poor Amanda is having trouble breathing, I'm trying to gasp out the words for the oxygen tank!

lena_hope - Merci, Tiff! That was great! A peck today, a lip lock tomorrow! Sorry wishful thinking. This tagalogue definitely deserves a triple *sigh* times infinity! It was just what the doctor ordered!

ForeverSMK - As always, Tiff, a great tagalogue. Due to limitations of time, I know the show couldn't have gone into the length you did, but I would have killed for another 45 seconds! Just long enough for him to do just what you described. Leaned over and given that brief, but oh so hot kiss! Sometimes a little means a WHOLE lot!

HeartPendant - Aww ... I was screaming at the TV for them to kiss already! What a tease these writers were ... good thing you're here to save the day, Tiff! I loved that little peck ... but I want more kisses! I love the way Amanda evasively talked around Dotty and leaves before Dotty can ask anything! Amanda is such a pro! The whole dinner scene is so real ... I love it when Lee winks at Amanda ... like he's sharing some kind of secret with her ... and that kiss on her hand ... SIGH! Thanks for taking us along on their "date"! My heart would skip a beat and I would lose ALL thoughts too if I was that close to Lee! Can't we linger here for a minute? Loved it!

MusicBox - Oh man! (sigh) This is romance. ROFL! I know this is the original part, but doesn't the look on his face when he says, "How much?" just send shivers down your spine? LOL! Gotta love the way he's looking at her here. I brought the ice water! Yep! I would have been short of breath too! I really like the exchange between Amanda and Dotty. It flows so well and is just like them! I love Dotty. You write her so well. You write everyone so well! Your grasp of SMK is awesome, Tiff, and I love reading these. Have I said that before? "...by the way, you look beautiful." (sigh) "To blackmail!" ROFL! Yeah, it'll get you everywhere, Amanda! You should blackmail him more often. Umm ... yeah, we can guarantee it's going to be VERY enjoyable!

smkukfan - Great stuff, Tiff ... just what I was looking for. As some might be alienated by my suggestion that the tag to this episode could've been better, you've just proved my point! My only complaint with the original tag? I just want to say: "KISS HER ALREADY!" And now he has. Thanks, Tiff! Why they let you (not to mention us) 'tag along' with them on their date, I really don't know. Glad they do though! Just love Dotty and can see her doing just what you wrote. She nearly spat the water into the glass when she saw him, but somehow managed to swallow and calmly turn to face her mother. By now I was ROTFLOL as they say ... which is a BIT embarassing in the middle of the office! I don't care. As I said before, Tiff, great job ... and it seems I still have a job (for now at least!) so keep them coming.

Leave a comment

Go to J. Edgar's Ghost - Tagalogue

 

FLIGHT TO FREEDOM

daizy680 - Wow! I couldn't breathe through the middle part there!

randibaby - Great, Tiff! Sounds like a fanfic for you to write Tiff ... "New Horizons" Hmm ... I like that!

chickagent - Oh! Is their cruise over already? Nice job, Tiff. Very romantic...sailing under the stars. Sigh....

'Vette36 - I don't know what else to say, except how great that tagalogue was, Tiff. This is my morning cup o' joe, a tagalogue from Tiff. And it's always delicious!

BBisBest - Beautifully written, Tiff. I especially enjoyed it because we lost our DirecTV signal after about 10 minutes of the program. Rats. But your tagalogue is always a TREASURE!

AmandaLee - The part where Lee is feeding Amanda and watching her, then waiting for her opinion is such a great bit ... you can just feel the romantic tension ... thanks for the pay off, Tiff!

SMK720 - Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes,yes, YES! Thank goodness! Finally! WOW! About time! Think maybe this is the reason we never hear about or see the MHII again? I sure couldn't park it after that! Great tagalogue, Tiff! Thanks.

HeartPendant - YES! Finally! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Those two sure can flirt! Tiff, you must be an excellent cook! These dishes you describe Lee cooking sound scrumptious! Yummy! And to be having these dishes with Lee ... SIGH! Thanks!

smkukfan - Well, you did it again, Tiff. I really look forward to reading these although it often takes me ages as I sneak a paragraph ... do some work ... sneak another. The last couple I printed off so I could read them on the train ride home ... much more relaxing than avoiding eye contact with the other weirdos. Anyway, loved it. Thanks!

Spyz'nTraining - Awesome job, as usual. Kathy and I always look forward to your tagalogues. I work evenings and am still wound up so I decided to get on the forum and was so glad to see your tagalogue! Kathy will be on first thing after school to read it ... we usually read them together. I may get in trouble for reading it before her! Couldn' t resist reading it, though.

MusicBox - (sigh) "One of these days, Stetson," she mildly threatened, leaving him to decipher her meaning. Sending us to the hot tub again! I like the fact that he completely trusts her to sail the yacht. Especially when he's below deck. Just gave me a nice, sweet feeling. Love this one too. Of course, I find myself saying that a lot! So much better than the original. (sigh)

lena_hope - Wow! *SIGH* That was great! There is no doubt about the handsome man that will be in my dreams tonight! Got to hand it to you, Tiff, you really know how to write them! I wish I knew you when I first started watching this show! Now, it just seems that you can't watch the show without reading a "tagalogue by Tiff" afterward! Way to go! Thanks for the heart palpitations! This sigh was way off the charts! LOL! In fact, I'm still on the boat. Hope I get my land legs back soon!

Leave a comment

Go to Flight to Freedom - Tagalogue

 

THE WRONG WAY HOME

chickagent - Now *that's* the way a tag *should* have been done. That mushy seen will be hard to beat! Great stuff!

ForeverSMK - This was wonderful, Tiff! And what a great kiss! Sometimes less is more! This was definitely more! You are so good at this!

randibaby - Tres bien, Tiff! Loved this: ... his hand lightly nudged hers, and she understood the unspoken invitation. Very sweet! Nice job!

Teal - He's not the only one who wonders about the stories Mrs. McDonald would tell! Maybe you can sneak one of these into a later tagalogue! Nice job, once again!

emaspy777 - Love your stuff, Tiff. I still think you should do a book series like "The Hardy Boys" or "Nancy Drew". I love your writing. Thanks for the great reading and all the warm, fuzzy feelings.

magdap - I enjoy all your tagalogues, Tiff, but I think this was one of the best. I agree with how you write them. There had to be more kissing than what we saw. I think the next episode is indicative of that.

cubscoutlady - I said elsewhere that I've always struggled with this tag because I wasn't sure what the writers intended for the viewers to get from it, but thanks to YOU Tiff, I get it! GREAT ending to this story!

SMKaddict - I agree with your take on the show, Tiff, showing that a lot more went on behind the scenes. Just wish the writers would have shown a little bit of it on-screen instead of making us wait so, so long for ATWAS. Thanks for helping!

kolinsky - I really enjoyed this one, Tiff. An excellent way to show the past being put to rest amicably, and a readiness for them all to move on with the future. I'm not sure it's exactly the way I picture it playing out, but I really enjoyed your take on it. Thanks for writing!

leeluvr2 - Everytime I read one of your tagalogues I think, "This one is the best!" Here we go again ... great tagalogue, Tiff! This is really one of the most frustrating original tags from the series -- what the heck kind of ending was that anyway? Thanks for the additional romance to this story!

SMK720 - I agree with your take on things, wholeheartedly! How can anyone look at the tag of J. Edgars Ghost and not think that Lee didn't lean in and kiss her? So, here's to kisses shared by our favorite duo! And to a great writer who gives them those opportunities! Way to go, Tiff!

Liz - What a wonderful welcome back to the forum. Many thanks for posting your tagalogues. To quote Amanda in Sour Grapes, "a day without Tiff's tagalogues is like a day without sunshine." Love that Lee and Amanda are moving in the relationship direction. Even better, they're still not "there" so there's plenty of fun to come.

eeyore - This is one of my favorites, Tiff! A much needed conversation between these two. I am definitely in agreement that more went on behind the scenes that we knew about. LOVE that you show us! If there were ever any doubt, just look at the tag to Boy Who Would be King...not one of my favorite episodes overall, but the closeness between these two at the end says it all!

lena_hope - I was definitely thankful for your tagalogue for saving the ending of this episode! Keep those kisses coming! Great job! After watching today's episode, I was disappointed and felt kind of bad for poor Lee standing there and watching Amanda and Joe! I knew I just had to read your tagalogue because you always put such a great spin on the episodes! Way to go! Looking forward to the next one!

Whaki4SMaKi - I think we should sneak back and put Mrs. McDonald under interogation. She may be holding some vital information that that we may "need to know". Great job, Tiff, thanks again. I must confess and apologize. I have been delinquent about reading these tagalogues lately, and I'm sorry. After reading this one I'm asking myself why! I love them so much, how could I not read them? I also agree with how you show more behind the scenes. We all know it happened, and I think you're right on target with their relationship. Good job, as usual. Thanks for your hard work on these!

MusicBox - Why don't we bag this college scene and get some fresh air? ROFL! Spoken like a true 35-year-old! I really like how you tied in Amanda's indecision and realization of past and future with Leslie and Lee's *decision* when Lee invited Amanda to dinner. I can totally see Amanda comparing her feelings to Lee's. (sigh) I don't know what it is about the part where he reached for her hand, but I just love it. It just says so much about him. Does that make sense? They just keep getting better and better! The next ones should be great too!

smkukfan - This is really great, Tiff. As discussed elsewhere on the forum, the writing you do here is so much better than the graphic, non-romantic stuff the tv shows force on us today (mostly). For instance, the following paragraph - to me - has so much more meaning and feeling than all the sex scenes in the movies put together. She gently pulled her hand from his and turned to walk again. Instead of finding its familiar place at the small of her back, his hand lightly nudged hers, and she understood the unspoken invitation. Needing the added reassurance as much as the comfort, she slipped her left hand into his right, interlacing their fingers. That is just so sweet and romantic - I'll take your version EVERY time. Thanks!

Leave a comment

Go to The Wrong Way Home - Tagalogue

 

FAST FOOD FOR THOUGHT

SMK720 - One big, huge, romance-filled sigh! Beautiful. Now where's the ice bath....Love it, love it, LOVE IT!

cutenose - Tiff, don't stop there, I never want them to end ... Keep writing until the next episode starts!

nectar99 - Wow, that was yummy! I confess I'm a few behind, but this one was way too scrumptious!

cubscoutlady - Your tagalogues are always #1 on my "To Do" list in the morning! I've got my priorities straight!

emaspy777 - Haven't heard from me in a while ... but just had to say the only thing wrong with it, Tiff, is that it had to end. *sigh*

kolinsky - Nice, Tiff. If this keeps up, you're just going to have to cook for us all some time. Your dinners are a lot more interesting than mine!

MyAmanda - I'm trying to start breathing again. WOW! Your tagalogues really add the shall we say "special touch" that we are all craving at the end of an ep.

ForeverSMK - As always, Tiff, a GREAT tagalogue! Lee sure can heat things up ... both in the kitchen and on the couch! Great kiss! Great exchange! Yummy! Yummy!

Liz - ForeverSMK said that things are warming up. Yes they are! Methinks they're heating up too! Tingles, tingles, tingles after reading this one, Tiff. Thanks. Love it!

NotExactly - Amanda is so lucky to have a handsome spy cooking her such wonderful sounding meals. And we all know that's not the only thing she's lucky about! Great addition, Tiff!

AmandaLee - Heavy sigh ... daydream'y' eyes ... ahhh ... it's time to turn up the AC or something ... some day soon, my prince will come ... I'd love to have a man like Lee 'spoil' me!

MrsKing83 - (a soft, dreamy sigh!) Wow! That was great! I loved it! Way to go. That was great writing! Keep going with it. I am a writer myself and that was very good. You go, Tiff!

needtoknow - Tiff, you know I am supposed to know somthing about food (graduated in it), but I am begining to wonder. Your descriptions are so good. You're a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing.

Whaki4SMaKi - Wow Tiff, that was great. I like your tagalogues. I kept waiting for the phone to ring, but it didn't. Yeah! It's been a long time since I had a dinner like that. Need to do something about that. Great tagalogue!

Scarecrow2001 - Great one Tiff. I have always wondered what that dinner together might have been like. Couldn't understand with all of those dinners and afterwork meals together how they didn't kiss sooner than what they did.

BBisBest - BEAUTIFULLY written. It is interesting how Lee has assignments all over the world, and manages to pick up cooking hints from them ... like the fritatas, etc. Sounds like a VERY romantic evening. Sure beats being locked in a flash freezer with Francine!

chplady - WOW did it get hot in here all of a sudden? (Note to self: make sure to have plenty of ice water around while reading Tiff's tagalogues.) Well, Tiff. A great tagalogue. Loved the exchange between these two. Also the kiss. That is the way the tag should have been.

lena_hope - *SIGH* Thank you for another great tagalogue, Tiff! I love those dinners in Lee's apartment! Lucky Amanda! *SIGH*This calls for a night in front of the fan for a cool down after that kiss! Sweet and gentle but still very passionate! Wowsa! Sweet SMacKy dreams tonight for sure!

ElioraJoy - Tiff, I'm glad I hung around the forum (that wasn't hard) long enough to get to read this tonight. I usually read it when I'm off line and then forget to come back for a comment, but I decided to read it here. This one is awesome! I'd really like to taste some of Lee's food. One of my specialties is meatloaf, but I don't see Lee making that.

Astraea - Great as always, Tiff! *dreamy sigh* Can you believe I'm not even what one might call a romantic? But at least I got the hopeless part right! "You're a spy." She spoke the three words as if that said it all. No, no, no! Wrong three words! *bangs head on keyboard in frustration and twitches incessantly* When are we gonna get it right? ...Oh, well. I suppose we're getting there... Keep up the fantabulous work, Tiff! BTW, dinners are fine with me, especially when they're as *cough* successful *cough* as the ones in your tagalogues!

HeartPendant - So much anticipation for this one! WOW! First of all, I think I need to try that dish...but without cheese...I'm allergic to dairy products...anything I can substitute for cheese? Can I say..."DELICIOUS!"? It was wonderful! And if your description of Lee's cooking and the recipes are norm in your household, may I come over for dinner sometime? OMGosh! It was getting pretty hot in Lee's apartment there! I totally LOVED this exchange! "Whatever you do, it definitely worked. That was one of the best meals I've had in a long time. I'm going to get spoiled if you keep cooking for me." ... "I'd love to spoil you," he muttered. ~~ And he got caught! I loved the kiss! SO sweet...LOVED THIS! Thanks, Tiff!

MusicBox - I really love the insights to the originals. Love this little catch about how Lee almost reached out to touch Amanda but didn't because they were in the hallway. I have to agree about her finding her "usual" place on Lee's couch. I love this! I'm in the same camp as you. There was SO much more that went on we didn't see ... Lee, you're not the only one who wished your cover could have been something different! Amanda and a few hundred others weren't real thrilled with that *cover* either, bucko! OH! Yeah, that secret. Uh huh. Phew, she almost got you there, Scarecrow! "I'd love to spoil you," he muttered. (cough, sputter) HELLO! What is the rating on this thing? OH! You didn't mean that way, ok. Still like the line. Phew, you need to remember not to drink ANYTHING while reading these! Never know what you're going to read! Gotta love the *perhaps ... not necessarily ... not exactly* exchange too. Too cute, and so them! I bet Lee *will* have the last laugh. So, is that what we're calling it now? There goes that rating thing again. Good thing I have plenty of ice water handy ... Aw, pooey! He pulled back! Loved this one, Tiff. And now I'm one tagalogue closer to having them all done!

smkukfan - Great job, Tiff! Think I said something before about reading these at work and 'who cares if I pay the wrong people?' I got in this morning and I had actually run the completely wrong payroll. Oops! Do you think my mind wasn't on my work? It's all your fault Tiff. (grins) "What, and ruin a perfectly good hate-hate relationship?" Amanda grinned. "Never!" Phew! Don't want to spoil that relationship ... it's one of the great things about the show! Hmm, where would all of this lead? Good question! "Usual place," huh! Nice going Amanda/Tiff ... make Lee squirm! I love to see him squirm! Shame, she's just talking about his dinner secrets! LOL! "I'd love to spoil you," he muttered. "What was that?" Lee panicked. Loving this! Yes, Lee, you just go on believing that Amanda suddenly became deaf...or stupid! She heard you, that's for sure! Shame, Amanda ... you should've pursued the little comment ... although, not pursuing it is actually more in character. I just want to know! (grins) Hmm, whatever else could she possibly have been talking about besides a chat? LOVE the "perhaps ... not necessarily ... not exactly" exchange. Oops, I've just spit my Coke all over the keyboard ... again. I seem to do that a lot reading these. Is it me, or is it suddenly getting a little warm in here? And oh, DARN! He pulled back! Can you write a rubbish one please, Tiff? It's hard to come up with different nice things to say ... besides, I don't like doing "nice," as you well know! (grins) I prefer evil and nasty ... but you don't let me do it with these (hehe)! So, great work as always.

Leave a comment

Go to Fast Food for Thought - Tagalogue

 

ONE BEAR DANCES, ONE BEAR DOESN'T

Nightcrawler - Great Tiff! Loved the part where Amanda ran her fingers down his face! So cute!

NotExactly - I sure did enjoy it! Especially the kisses! I think my heart was fluttering as much as Amanda's!

Spins2 - Another "wow" one , Tiff! I look forward to reading these every day and looking forward to Stemwinder I and II!

SMK720 - I'm so glad you believe that our favorite couple was smooching on the sly! Just love your tagalogues, the way they should have been the first time around!

kolinsky - I am enjoying these, Tiff, but I must confess what I've been wondering is how you're going to handle Amanda's apparent surprise in DMLNT with the closeness you're portraying so far. I guess I'll find out soon!

Liz - Have said it before, Tiff, but you are so good with the details! Lee catching falling pieces of lettuce with his free hand to put them back in his sandwich? We can so see all of this! Thanks for bringing it all to life for us.

Scarecrow2001 - Oooh! Good one. Love the connection between Amanda and her mother about getting involved with spy work accidentally. Also loved the Lee and Amanda scene about what was missing in the report. Very cute tagalogue.

lena_hope - I loved it, Tiff! Another great one to put in the record books! This definitely had a lot of *sigh*able moments, hence the all caps *SIGH*! Way to go! More kisses for our favorite couple! Thanks a bunch for putting another great spin on another great ep!

smkukfan - Loved it, Tiff ... even though it took me 3 hours to read it this morning (at work, of course, so many interruptions). Why people think they need to be paid when I have tags to read, I'll never know! Really enjoyed this tagalogue. Getting a bit warm now! Phew, I've got steam coming out of my ears I'm so hot! I just love it all, Tiff, except that darned interruption (very SMK). Can't wait for the next one.

HeartPendant - Oh, Tiff! I have butterflies in my stomach and goosebumps on my arms, it's so good! Darn Francine! Why did she have to come into the Q-Bureau? Why don't they just make a habit of locking the door as soon as they enter the room? As Lee said in Tale of Dancing Weasel, "Lock this door behind me Amanda. The security is very light up here!" Lousy, lousy timing! I guess you'll have to stay in canon, though! Now you've got me intrigued about what you're going to do for ATWAS! Thanks, Tiff!

Jude4247 - This was great. I liked how you brought up Dotty not making the connection with Billy. I always wondered that too. But, Dotty is "clueless" most of the time. Liked how you brought up the conversation that Lee heard when Dotty was telling Andrei that she thought Amanda had someone at work. How Lee brings it up. The way Amanda describes him....he has amazing eyes....(Oh yeah!) Liked the image of the butterflies in Amanda's stomach. I always put myself in her situation and I can imagine her feeling those feelings. Under Lee's charms. Boy, would I love to be Amanda. Have I said that before?

Leave a comment

Go to One Bear Dances, One Bear Doesn't - Tagalogue

 

PLAYING FOR KEEPS

ForeverSMK - Lee is such a sweetie! And I'd let him 'nurse' me any day! Thanks, Tiff!

AmandaLee - 'Aww' is right! I'd like to snuggle up with Lee on the couch (or anywhere).

chickagent - Awww! I love Lee caring for Amanda! Makes a nice change! Sweet! Really sweet!

Scarecrow2001 - You come up with some good tagalogues, Tiff! I enjoy reading them anytime. Thanks.

cubscoutlady - Loved it, Tiff! Lee was so sweet in this one! Amanda is one lucky girl in your tagalogues!

ElioraJoy - Thank you! It made up for the almost Amanda-less ep. I wouldn't mind being sick if Lee was there to nurse me.

smkukfan - Another really good one, Tiff! You could see Lee was hooked in the episode from the phone calls, but this is a really nice touch. Aww.

Liz - Love the word "oozty," but love your work even more, Tiff. Where would SMKers be without your tagalogues? Four short seasons just wasn't enough!

waitinthecar - We're very lucky to have such excellent fiction writers like you. It makes the series "come alive" even more if that's possible. Thanks, Tiff!

twentytwopieces - Very awesome job you do, Tiff. I enjoy reading these and thank you so much for them! Keep up the good work can't wait to read more!

mdmom - I always liked this episode. I remember seeing it during the original run and saying 'Oh, yeah, he's so hooked!" Loved the tagalogue. I think this has got to be my favorite so far.

ScarecrowLover - Thanks once again, Tiff! Hmm ... you think Lee would give me a massage if I got sick? (hehe) Ok, I'll stop, but I really could use his magic fingers. I haven't slept good all week.

HeartPendant - Another good one! Lee is just so SWEET and very thoughtful! Yup ... he's HOME! And I loved how you ended this ... so sweet! It was just a great SIGH moment! Loved it! Thanks, Tiff!

chplady - Think I could use some of that soup right now ... *cough* I think I feel a cold coming on. LOL! And my shoulders are kinda tense...oh well, no Lee around to take care of it, but it sure would be nice!

Liz - Couldn't help but think, "I wanna be Amanda!" as I read this. So sweet. And I love that Lee is having these thoughts: "Every minute that passed was one less he would have to spend with Amanda." Gotta love it. Thanks, Tiff.

JenniLee - It's great...yada yada yada...really liked it...yada yada yada...wonderful writing...yada yada yada...When are you going to write some bad ones so I have something else to day? Good thing I can cut and paste on my computer.

Spins2 - Liked this one, too. Thanks! I have loved and enjoyed these since I joined the forum in April.
You are an extremely talented writer and I just hope you write another fanfiction again. (hint, hint) I loved the one you wrote a few months ago!

NotExactly - For those of us for whom RL is too busy, I'll take your tagalogues anytime I can get them! They're definitely too soul-satisfying to pass up, so I make sure I read them after each episode, no matter when I actually watch it! Thanks again.

eeyore - *sigh* I've had a cold for almost a week now, but Lee got lost and never made it to my house to take care of me. Colds just aren't near as much fun without a handsome secret agent around to make soup and offer great massages! But your tagalogue definitely helped make up for it! Another great one!

lena_hope - This was just what the doctor ordered for this episode! I kept thinking that Lee should take her some soup and give her a little TLC. Thanks for providing the cure! Of course, another job well done! I may not have had Lee with some soup but at least I had your tagalogue to help me feel better! *applauds* Thank you for all of your great writing! I don't know what I would do without having these tagalogues to read after each episode! Thanks a bunch for all the hard work of putting these tagalogues together. They are well appreciated!

Leave a comment

Go to Playing for Keeps - Tagalogue

Go to Page Three of Season Three Comments


Season One | Season Two | Season Three | Season Four